Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Domestic and international violence


I was extremely turned off by this article from the beginning. I find comparing American soldiers to wife beaters absolutely pathetic and disgusting. Almost as pathetic and disgusting as the author represents our troops. Maybe I'm crazy but I found the jump from soldiers to wife beaters to be a large one. Even the title seemed wild to me: "Domestic and international violence are one and the same." The sub title states: "John Stuart Mill had it right. Our abuse of women at home mirrors, and sometimes dictates, our behavior abroad." John Stuart Mill was a nineteenth century writer, I'm not sure if his work can be considered relevant here in the twenty first century. The author bases her argument that "tyranny at home is the model for tyranny abroad" on Mill's writings. The sentence after this statement, the author contradicts herself saying: "When tyranny and violence are practiced on a grand scale in foreign lands, the practice also intensifies at home." This makes the point that violence overseas causes violence here, not the other way around. The issue of violence against service women is not one to be taken lightly, but it seems poorly placed. The article is unorganized. I would write about violence against women in the military or how domestic and overseas violence are related, not both in the same article when the relation isn't close.

2 comments:

  1. I agree with your blog. She does not make a good connection between military personal and people who promote domestic violence. There was a lot of pathos in the article and I think she wrote this when she was upset about something.

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  2. I too understand the way the author could connect the way domestic violence felons could be compared to the way American soldiers treat Afghans overseas, but she was way out of line with this article. I do not understand the correlation between wife beaters and our American soldiers, and I hope that this isn't the perception that most women have about them.

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